Monday 5 April 2021

NaPoWriMo - Day 4 - Space < Between > Space

Hello there!  

I seem to be running a bit behind on NaPoWriMo.  Also not able to get into all the activities due to time constraints.


So on Day 5, here is my Day 4 poem on the prompt of liminal spaces.  It is about a space I am familiar with - the early morning Anglian landscape.  The space between night and day, where the space between land and sky is often blurred. 



Space <Between> Space


My senses try to open

in the askew dawn light 

< Insert Horizon >

and formless ground below

on a frosty morning walk.


Out along the fen drove

where three-quarter sky

< Insert Horizon>

touches one quarter land 

making a whole landscape.


Morning rising sun slits 

the grey sky-screen mistiness

< Insert Horizon >

rich dark soil caressed

by nature’s warm hand.


Kestrels swoop as Owls depart

and morning bird calls begin

< Insert Horizon >

Hedgerows weaving into focus

Ditches refuse the light.


Landscapes merging without

that dividing space

< Between >

space that marks portals

closed to human senses.


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